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Jamie, or John?

Oookay, then!

Sorry to be so late in getting this post up; I’ve been in New Mexico for the last week, and the internet connection there was Just Abysmal; could barely keep it open long enough to tweet, let alone upload anything longer.
First things first: Upcoming appearances.

I’m flying to New York on Monday, and will be appearing (briefly) at the RWA convention, held at the Marriott Marquis. Appearances will be:

The Literacy Signing, where most of the published authors taking part will be available to sell/sign books—this is from 5:30-7:30 on June 28th, at the Marriott Marquis. This event _is_ open to the public, and I _believe_ that you’re allowed to bring in up to three of your own books from home to be signed, if you like.
The opening panel of the convention, where I’ll be taking part in a discussion with two other Random House authors, Steve Berry and Tess Gerritsen. This is part of the convention and open only to convention attendees. It’ll be from 8:30-10:00 AM on June 29th.

Then on July 5th—publication date for the cool new 20th-anniversary OUTLANDER edition!—I fly to Laramie Wyoming, where I’ll be doing the keynote speech for the Sir Walter Scott conference at the University of Wyoming. The conference program is here http://www.uwyo.edu/scottconf2011/program.html , but I don’t yet have a detailed personal schedule. I _will_ be doing at least one public book-signing, though; will post time and place as soon as I get them.

On July 8th, I fly _back_ to New York, for ThrillerFest, at the Hyatt. There, I’ll be doing a Livestream event with James Rollins (Powell’s Books is supplying books to be sold during this event—and I certainly _hope_ they’ll have the 20th-anniversary edition!) from 2-4:00 PM on July 8th.

On the evening of July 8th, I’ll be doing a joint signing with several other authors for a collaborative mystery novel called NO REST FOR THE DEAD. (This is one of those for-charity efforts—proceeds for this one go to cancer research—where a number of well-known authors take turns writing chapters, and the editor then goes through and kind of smooths things out so the story is coherent. Or so we hope, anyway.)

The signing will be held at 7:00 PM at the Center for Fiction, (17 East 47th Street, New York, NY 10017), and authors attending will include Peter James, Marcia Talley, John Lescroart, RL Stine, Diana Gabaldon,Jeffery Deaver, Gayle Lynds and Andrew Gulli. (Just for my own part, I’m fine with people bringing their own books to be signed, too.) This is open to the public.

Aaaand, on July 9th, I’ll do a Spotlight Interview (at the Hyatt) for ThrillerFest, Kathleen Antrim being the interviewer. That’s from 1:00-1:50 PM. And then I’ll do a book-signing for the convention (open only to convention attendees) from 5:00-6:00 PM at the convention bookstore in the hotel.

Then I rush home on the 10th {g}, and do the Official Launch Party for the 20th-anniversary OUTLANDER on July 11th, at The Poisoned Pen bookstore in Scottsdale. 7:00 PM!

Righto. Now, I had promised to show you the two openings I have for SCOTTISH PRISONER. As it stands, I’m opening the book with Jamie’s point of view—but I _could_ open with Lord John’s first chapter instead, and do Jamie’s second.  I did it this way because I’d like people to realize right away that this is Jamie’s book, as much as Lord John’s—but it _is_ a Rather Unusual {cough} way to open a book.

So—those of you who don’t read excerpts should stop Right Here.

Those of you who _do_…here you go, and hope you enjoy them! Let me know what you think: Jamie first, or Lord John?

THE SCOTTISH PRISONER
(Copyright 2011 Diana Gabaldon)
Chapter 1:

Helwater, the Lake District
April 1, 1760

It was so cold out, he thought his cock might break off in his hand. If he could find it. The thought passed through his sleep-mazed mind like one of the small, icy drafts that darted through the loft, making him open his eyes.
He could find it now; had waked with his fist wrapped round it and desire shuddering and twitching over his skin like a cloud of midges. The dream was wrapped just as tightly round his mind, but he knew it would fray in seconds, shredded by the snores and farts of the other grooms. He needed her, needed to spill himself with the feel of her touch still on him.
Hanks stirred in his sleep, chuckled loudly, said something incoherent, and fell back into the void, murmuring, “Bugger, bugger, bugger…”
Jamie said something similar under his breath in the Gaelic, and flung back his blanket. Damn the cold.
He made his way down the ladder into the half-warm, horse-smelling fug of the barn, nearly falling in his haste, ignoring a splinter in his bare foot. He hesitated in the dark, still urgent. The horses wouldn’t care, but if they noticed him, they’d make enough noise, perhaps, to wake the others.

Wind struck the barn and went booming round the roof. A strong chilly draft with a scent of snow stirred the somnolence, and two or three of the horses shifted, grunting and whickering. Overhead, a murmured “‘ugger” drifted down, accompanied by the sound of someone turning over and pulling the blanket up round his ears, defying reality.

Claire was still with him, vivid in his mind, solid in his hands. He could imagine that he smelled her hair in the scent of fresh hay. The memory of her mouth, those sharp white teeth …he rubbed his nipple, hard and itching beneath his shirt, and swallowed.

His eyes were long accustomed to the dark; he found the vacant loose-box at the end of the row and leaned against its boards, cock already in his fist, body and mind yearning for his wife.
He’d have made it last if he could, but he was fearful lest the dream go altogether and he surged into the memory, groaning. His knees gave way in the aftermath and he slid slowly down the boards of the box into the loose piled hay, shirt rucked round his thighs and his heart pounding like a kettle drum.

[end section]

(more stuff in this chapter, of course)

Chapter 2: The Fate of Fuses

London
Argus House

Lord John Grey eyed the ribbon-tied packet on his knee as though it were a bomb. In fact, it couldn’t have been more explosive had it been filled with black powder and equipped with a fuse.
His attitude as he handed it to his brother must have reflected this knowledge, for Hal fixed him with a gimlet eye and raised one brow. He said nothing, though, flicking loose both ribbon and wrapping with an impatient gesture and bending his head at once over the thick sheaf of densely-written sheets that emerged.

Grey couldn’t stand to watch him read through Charles Carruthers’s post-mortem denunciation, recalling each damning page as Hal read it. He stood up and went to the window of the study that looked out into the back garden of Argus House, ignoring the swish of turning pages and the occasional blasphemous mutterings behind him.

Hal’s three boys were playing a game of tigers and hunters, leaping out at each other from behind the shrubbery with shrill roars, followed by shrieks of delight and yells of “Bang! Take that, you striped son of a bitch!”

The nurse seated on the edge of the fish-pool, keeping a tight grip on baby Dottie’s gown, looked up at this, but merely rolled her eyes with a martyred expression. Flesh and blood has its limits, her expression said clearly, and she resumed paddling a hand in the water, luring one of the big goldfish close so that Dottie could drop bits of bread to it.

John longed to be down there with them. It was a rare day for early April, and he felt the pulse of it in his blood, urging him to be outside, running bare-foot through young grass. Running naked down into the water… The sun was high, flooding warm through the glass of the French windows, and he closed his eyes and turned his face up to it.

Siverly. The name floated in the darkness behind his eyes, pasted across the blank face of an imagined cartoon major, drawn in uniform, an outsized sword brandished in his hand, and bags of money stuffed into the back of his breeches, obscene bulges under the skirt of his coat. One or two had fallen to the ground, bursting open so that you could see the contents–coin in one, the other filled with what looked like poppets, small wooden doll-like things. Each one with a tiny knife through its heart.

Hal swore in German behind him. He must have reached the part about the rifles; German oaths were reserved for the most stringent occasions, French being used for minor things like a burnt dinner, and Latin for formal insults committed to paper. Minnie wouldn’t let either Hal or John swear in English in the house, not wanting the boys to acquire low habits. John could have told her it was too late for such caution, but didn’t.

He turned round to see Hal on his feet, pale with rage, a sheet of paper crumpled in one hand.

“How dare he? How dare he?”

A small knot he hadn’t known was there dissolved under John’s ribs.

“You believe Carruthers, then?”

Hal glared at him.

“Don’t you? You knew the man.”

He had known Charles Carruthers–in more than one sense.

“Yes, I believed him when he told me about Siverly in Canada–and that–” he nodded at the papers, thrown in a sprawl across Hal’s desk, “–is even more convincing. You’d think he’d been a lawyer.”
He could still see Carruthers’s face, pale in the dimness of his attic room in [town], drawn with ill-health but set with grim determination to live long enough to see justice done. Charlie hadn’t lived that long, but long enough to write down every detail of the case against Major Gerald Siverly, and to entrust it to him.

He was the fuse that would detonate this particular bomb. And he was all too familiar with what happened to fuses, once lit.

[end section]

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  1. I’m with Crystal. Start with the LJ section but move on to Jamie ASAP.

  2. BTW when do you find time to write with all those appearances? :)

  3. I say go with the Lord John chapter first.

    I am sitting here now wondering WTH is going on with the stack of papers that John just gave Hal to read! I want to know!!!!!!!!! :)

    As for marketing value, especially for new readers, what do I know. But I will be buying the book either way, and my vote is the Lord John chapter. :)

    Can’t wait!

    Thanks, Diana.

    Judie

    • Judie,
      Read the last Novella published, it will explain who Carruthers is at least and where/how LJ received this package.
      “Lord John and the Custom of the Army” [novella, originally publi shed in WARRIORS, edited by George R.R. Martin and Gardner Dozois.]
      Susan

      • THANK YOU for the book title… I have all of both except that one…. will find it and get it before the big road trip….
        ;))))))))))))

  4. I’m torn, If its for new readers they will take to the John’s segment first more intro to the plot. If its for the devoted they will love the Jamie’s passage. Personally, I would wait to see how the story plays out, while I was writing. Which of them talks to me the most.

  5. Dear Diana,

    It’s thoughtful of you to ask us, your readers. Everyone here contributed quite valid arguments for both openings.
    In case you are taking a poll, I cast my vote for the Jamie opening. What more could a girl want than a man thinking about his private appendage in the first lines of a book?

    It’s a treat either way. {g}

  6. I vote for Jamie’s scene. It grabs you and pulls you in, especially for those of us that miss him so dearly! Looking forward to it either way! :-)

  7. My head tells me the Jamie opening is the best to grab readers attention from the beginning. My heart tells me the John opening because I am a huge fan of his Lordship and find him just as fascinating as Jamie. Hard core followers of the Outlander series will read it regardless, but it may help those who don’t like LJG or can take or leave him, to continue reading if you start out with Jamie. I think even those who have never read Outlander, but pick up the book and browse it, would be more likely to keep reading with the Jamie opener. Jamie would be the “hook” so to speak.

    I see you will be at the Marriott Marque. I was just in New York and stayed there. It is excellent hotel, I was very impressed. I don’t know if you have stayed there before, but the hotel has a rather unusual elevator system. Or it was to me, but I don’t travel near as much as you do, so maybe it won’t be new to you.

  8. Dear Diana,

    It’s thoughtful of you to ask us, your readers. Everyone here contributed quite valid arguments for both openings.
    In case you are taking a poll, I cast my vote for the Jamie opening. What more could a girl want than a man thinking about his private appendage in the first lines of a book?

    It’s a treat either way. {g}

    Anne-Marie

  9. I think the Jamie beginning is most fitting; most of Lord John’s actions are framed by his intense feelings for Jamie, and most of Jamie’s by his intense feelings for Claire. To have the book start in this way draws us in immediately.

  10. Of Course I can hardly wait for the new book whomever starts it…but my vote would be for John for the same reasons and sediments that have already been noted. I was delighted to find out that I will find out ‘the rest of the story’ having just finished reading ‘ A Custom of the Army’. Perhaps putting Jamie’s scene first it will help the reader to realize that this book is as much about Jamie as it is about John seeing as John got first billing in the title…but ‘no’ I think for the story’s sake, John should go first. Whatever Diana, its all good.

    • I agree with Mary but no matter who you start with I will be buying the book.
      But I miss Jamie and Clare and wish you would finish the next book. You left so many cliff hangers in the last book.
      Thank you.

  11. While I LOVE Jamie, I agree that Lord John’s opening sets up the plot.

  12. For sure, the scene with Jaime. It pulls at the heartstrings and grabs the readers attention. After all, the love between Jaime and Clair is the heart of the series even though there is that triangle with LJG.

  13. Although I am dearly in love with Jamie, I vote for going with the LJG chapter first. Either way I’m sure the book will be as great as they all are. Can’t wait for my 20th anniversary copy of OUTLANDER. It will be a belated birthday gift to myself (being released the day after my bday).

    Thanks for all the hard work you put into all your books! I discovered them by chance when I read an interview with you in a Borders brochure of recently released books. Once I tracked down a copy of OUTLANDER I was hooked and didn’t stop until I’d read all three that had been released at that point and have reread all of them multiple times, as each new one is published.

  14. I vote for Jamie as the opening chapter. Thanks for asking. Can’t wait for the next novel! Whichever comes first I’m getting it. Thanks for your wonderful writing.

  15. Jamie. ‘Nuff said.

  16. Start with Lord John scene– it’s a Lord John book. Both are great chapters and fabulous writing, but putting the Jamie chapter second will surprise and reward those who have doubts about the LJ books being as good as the Outlander series, but bought it anyway!

  17. Jamie will always be first in my heart, so I would like to see him first in this book. Waiting is so hard!

  18. Hi Diana,
    Beginning the book with Lord John’s chapter seems the most logical. As alluring and heated as Jamie’s emotional need for Claire is, it doesn’t lead the reader into the plot, but adds to his a character. However, Lord John’s visit to Hal’s and the intrigue it brings will pull the reader in and want to read more of the book.
    I adore Jamie. I could marry him myself, and it breaks my heart to imagine him alone and hurting. I can’t wait to see where the scene goes from there.
    I adore Lord John too. He always has his hand in some mystery, and I love a good mystery.
    You have a very difficult decision on your hands. I’ll wait and see, and I am sure either way, the book will be enjoyed.
    Lynda

  19. Lord John. It sets up plot nicely and grabs you quick. The Jamie scene only grabs you if you’re already a Jamie fan, and hopefully you keep acquiring new readers who give you a try.

  20. I think it’s the pacing. Do you want to start off fast, with a bang? Jamie. Or do you want to draw us into your story, it felt like you’re setting up the scene so you could give us more later on. John. Personally, I’m a Jamie-fan, so I would vote for my bias instead of any literary reason.

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